My first paper revised...

In one last ditch effort I revised my first paper a tad to try to get a bit better of a grade on it. DCrane told me that I would get a B+, this paper is going to attempt to reach more of the A Minus or A range. Wink wink.. smile...

I added some good information on how much money 40 billion dollars is. That's how much Exxon Mobile made in profits last fiscal year. 40 billion dollars! That's more than 1,200 dollars a second!